Javon's project_Javon great project I noticed that you investigated the statistics of abortions in America and in different countries. You also went into depth explaining how women feel about abortions, and also gave your explanation on what being a mother means to you and how that is such a responsible role to take on.
I particularly valued the research you did on abortions the statistics I really think that gave your project a lot of substance and made it more interesting to read because you had factual evidence.
The main reason why this project mattered to me was because while having a conversation with Javon he explained to me what he was doing for his project and from the jump I was interested because he was actually going to interview a women that had an abortion.
Constructive Criticism: I feel that you should go more into depth with the questions you asked the person in the interview.
Stephen's project-Stephen very interesting project I realized that you focused on the pros and cons of Home births and hospital births, and you also focused on the C-Section rate in America and also the whole concept behind the OB/GYN.
I feel that when you went into depth with the advantages and disadvantages of home births, birthing centers, and hospital births was the most interesting part for me and I valued you that the most.
The main reason why I wanted to read your project is because when you did your elevator speech you had so much energy and a great introduction for your speech and it made me want to see what your project had to offer.
Amhara's project-I really likes your project because it was different from the rest of the students in the class. You were planning out a procedure to follow so when your mother decided to have another kid everything would be natural and the best for your mother.
I really valued your overall goal that you wanted to achieve in your project because you were applying what you learned from class,the movie, and the book to help out someone out in your family that you care for.
The reason your project mattered to me was because it was different the fact that you had a video that people could watch to see the work that you did for your project.
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